because i keep getting comments about these things and i don't want to waste your time...

all of my stories are done without capitalization... i just sort of started doing my journal that way and it carried over to everything else. this isn't for lack of knowledge about technicalities or because i'm lazy about it or because i'm making an artistic statement, it's just sort of how i've been writing. i know that it isn't "correct" and i'm not going to fix it because it is "incorrect".

i know that some of my sentences are long and may be immediately perceived as running on. a lot of them are purposely like that and are not run-on sentences. the length of them is intentional. also, some of my sentences are fragments. this is intentional. of course i still make mistakes, so if you think that it definitely wasn't intentional, please tell me.

unless it is a serious error that just doesn't make sense, most of my phrasing, grammar, and paragraph structure is deliberate, even if it seems sort of unusual. this includes my use of repetition.

if anyone has a moment to offer me some critique i would really appreciate it and definitely take a look at your work in return.